The Inspiration for the Opening in THE DECEPTION

State Fair Midway
Photo by Marina Martindale

The other day I was chatting with a friend who’s reading The Deception. One of the things she talked about was wanting to deck the boyfriend who dumps the leading lady in the first chapter.  I told her this chapter was inspired by a real-life event.

A few years ago I went to San Diego for a book festival. The following morning my friends and I went to Sea World. As we walked around the park we happened to pass by a well-dressed young lady sitting on a bench, sobbing her eyes out. A young man, most likely her boyfriend, stood next to her, with a very serious look on his face. As we hurried past I thought to myself, “I’ll bet that son of a bitch brought her here to dump her, probably thinking she wouldn’t cause a scene.” I’ll never know for sure, as I didn’t see them again, but that picture has always stayed in my mind. And you know what happens when something stays in a novel writer’s mind, don’t you? It comes out in a story. In this instance, it became the inspiration for the opening scene of The Deception, but with a different location. Instead of Sea World, the lady is dumped at The Arizona State Fair. The leading lady’s boyfriend thinks that by dumping her in public she won’t cause a scene, but he thinks wrong. Very wrong. There’s never a good time or place to dump anyone, and doing so in public only adds more humiliation to the person being dumped.

Inspiration can from anywhere and everywhere, oftentimes when I least expect it.

MM